Whistling Pig Music/Redbird Cafe's "Write A Song..."
(Contest#4)entries
09/16/99:08:24:34
Dimitrije
Your Title (none
given)
Your words were...
A complaint to God
Then
placed on... wall, betweeen us
I guess... this
is the end and please, you have
To leave part of... you
and i will remember you ,but
You say... it is mistake
For the time when... we
use to be together
You say that you'll... sorry
But you don't... care anymore for me
Found your... picture,when
we were
On the... holliday
So each time... when
i look at it
I'd see... you and me together,laughning
It's said, when... i
am alone and
that... you
are gone,but
When someone... next
come in my life
Then his... face
shall... give
me a new hope,body of
His...new
pleasure and he will...be
my new divine inspiration
09/19/99:16:50:39
Doris Andrea
Your Title Raindrops
Your words were...
like raindrops
Then placed on... on
my lifeline
I guess... that
you´ve planned
To leave part of... our
dream
You say... choose
the night
For the time when... I´m
not with you
You say that you'll... be
waiting
But you don't... -
now I know
Found your... scibbled
notes
On the... bedroom
door
So each time... I
come home now
I'd see... those
lines you wrote
It's said, when... I
come home
that... will
be forever
When someone... embraces
me now
Then his... heart
shall... remember
His... heart
will... break
09/21/99:20:51:32
Bonnie Belle
Your Title all i need
Your words were...
written in stone
Then placed on... the
mantel
I guess... the
fire that burned down you wanted
To leave part of... that
fast life alone
You say... i'm
gonna love you and leave you
For the time when... you
do i'll just die
You say that you'll... love
me
But you don't... want
me to hurt tonight
Found your... love
letters
On the... bed
room dresser
So each time... i
look in the mirror
I'd see... me
with out you
It's said, when... all
is forgiven
that... love
will come back
When someone... loves
you hard enough
Then his... heart
shall... be
free
His... love will...be
all that i need
09/30/99:01:11:23
Caroll Steiff
Your Title Your Silver Will Turn to Dust
Your words were...
written upon white linen
Then placed on... a
field of down
I guess... it
must be your intention
To leave part of... yourself
here somehow
You say... it's
a sweet reminder
For the time when... things
get rough
You say that you'll... love
me forever
But you don't... love
me near enough
Found your... photograph
left in the kitchen
On the... faucet
that I have to use
So each time... I
thirst for water
I'd see... that
photograph of you
It's said, when... a
man gathers silver
that... silver
is never enough
When someone... takes
credit for what he's not done
Then his... silver
shall... turn
to dust
His... silver will...
turn to dust
Your Title Don't Lose Time
Your words were...
locked in my mind
Then placed on... on
the wind
I guess... everyone
should learn
To leave part of... problems
behind
You say... to
enjoy life at this moment
For the time when... this
moment has passed
You say that you'll... always
have tomorrow
But you don't... want
to forget today
Found your... advice
inside my head
On the...wind
your words floated
So each time... stress
took over
I'd see... how
to push it aside
It's said, when... the
wind comes your way
that... you
should listen to its voice
When someone... sings
you to peace
Then his... mind
shall... relax
His... soul will...be
at peace
Whew!!!