Whistling Pig Music/Redbird Cafe's "Write A Song..."

contest # 2 - submissions (Feb 1 - March 31, 1999)


02/06/99:22:14:15
W.Quincy

Your Title  Window With A View

Last night I stood on the glistening sand dunes
Ran my toes through fine grains, pouring like breakwater
I pondered the elusive expanse before me
And the terns tipping alabaster wings; I'd like to lift up my wings

I dreamed of staying here
Just a cabin by the water and a window with a view
Full of moonbeams bouncing o'er midnight waves
And the restless burr of breaking tides

When people complain about city life, asking...
What am I doing in this concrete and steel cube
I think of moonlit waves near midnight dunes
And a window with a view


02/14/99:06:26:22
Brice Henderson

Your Title  Betty's Next Hit

Last night I walked along the empty beach
Ran my toes through the cool sand
I pondered the present, squandered the past
And the future is still at my command I'd like to say

I dreamed of those moments, in a restful sleep
and a peacefull song of joy the surf had made
Full of hope, all misgivings drifted out into the sea
And I wondered at the awesome prayer I prayed

When people come to you, Lord, asking questions
What am I, who are You, why are we here?
I think more of us should stop and simply thank You
And let Your gentle spirit guide us through the years


02/14/99:18:31:52
Tim Henderson

Your Title  Dust Bunnies

Last night I started coughing in my sleep, dear,
Ran my toes through the dust-bunnies, 'neath your bed
I pondered the all the cobwebs on your ceiling,
And the thought I'd like to clean this place kept running through my head

I dreamed of vacuum sweepers, mops and ajax,
a duster and a full blue windex spray
Full of lemon juice and super strong ammonia,
And
vinegar to keep the flies away,

When people cough and wheeze there in our parlor,
What am I gonna tell them's, what he said,
I think I may move into the Youth Hostel,
And where there's no big dust bunnies neath my bed.


02/19/99:15:49:48
carson grey

Your Title  Theory

Last night I talked to Einstein
Ran my toes through mass and time
I pondered the velocity
And the relativity I'd like to close my eyes and see

I dreamed of ageless timeliness
fusion and my youth and a curtain and a stage and lights
Full of fear
And truth

When people like me speak to God
What am I supposed to ask
I think I'll talk to Einstein
And fast forward through the past


02/21/99:21:20:31
billy marabella

Your Title  My Moonbeam

Last night I walked on the beach all alone. I
Ran my toes in the sand where we used to write poems and
I pondered the moon and how brightly it shone on the sand
And the sea and on me I'd like to think that was you, my Moonbeam

I dreamed of walking with you hand-in-hand
With the woman I love and an old coffee can
Full of seashells we found and a couple of clams
And a love found not even in dreams

When people ask me, my Moonbeam
What am I doing alone on the sand
I think I'll tell them my Moonbeam
And I are writing poems and making plans


02/23/99:17:58:10
Mike Plumbley, from the diamond Isle of Wight (UK)

Your Title  The Walmart song

Last night I dreamed of Awesome, Texas
Ran my toes in Barton Springs
I pondered the chilli in the morning
And the tequila at night I'd like to dream some more

I dreamed of steak on pink paper with
ribs in Lulling and a cold Perl beer
Full of dreams from Awesome, Texas
And a cold beer at Waterloo

When people say I'm crazy
What am I doing with my life?
I think I'll drop them off at Walmart
And head back to Awesome, Texas


02/26/99:11:51:09
E. G.

Your Title  Ode to Sanity

Last night I sat on my front porch
Ran my toes through our lawn of dirt
I pondered the rent that we're paying
And the landlord I'd like to hurt

I dreamed of a fabulous kitchen
wooden cabinets and a window due East
Full of bright morning sun, an imported white Bunn
And appliances matching tastefully

When people ask what am I doing
What am I still playing for?
I think of the babies waitin' at home
And the sanity I'm serving more


02/28/99:20:25:58
R. Baber

Your Title  New Rug Rag

Last night I walked barefoot across her new carpet
Ran my toes through the deep, plush, pile
I pondered the softness of the texture
And the feeling made me smile I'd like to lay this same kind o'er my tile

I dreamed of a discount carpet warehouse
with a wide selection and a payment plan
Full of different styles and colors
And a shiny delivery van

When people drop by my house to visit
What am I supposed to say
I think I'll buy myself that new rug
And I think I'll buy it today


03/03/99:19:28:54
Nevada

Your Title  I Wonder

Last night I walked across the sand
Ran my toes on the line of where the ocean meets the land
I pondered the person I am
And the person I'd like to be

I dreamed of a girl with perfect teeth
had a crown on her head and a pedestal so people can see
Full of self-centeredness, she made fun of me
And I wonder to myself, yeah I wonder to myself

When people try to change me, I wonder
What am I really supposed to be
I think what's wrong with just being myself
And not go through the trouble of being someone else


03/05/99:14:16:53
Ri'chard

Your Title  Only when I dream

Last night I I saw your face in a dream
Ran my toes across your jeans
I pondered the moment, as I tossed in my sleep
And the times we enjoyed I'd like to keep

I dreamed of you saying you were mine
To have and to hold and a life intertwined
Full of each other
And a love that's undying

When people see me weep
What am I but lonelyness it seems
I think my life's better when I sleep
And you're with me in my dreams


03/07/99:19:57:02
Tena Henson

Your Title  Mr. Right

Last night I sat on a chair
Ran my toes through someone's hair
I pondered the meaning of life
And the guy I'd like to kiss

I dreamed of holding you
closely and a bottle
Full of champagne
And then I woke up

When people see me
What am I to do
I think about you
And how you're too perfect


03/22/99:13:40:28
Lori O'Connor

Your Title  Rising

Last night I arose with the rising moon
Ran my toes through the green grass and dew
I pondered the sorrow and sadness of life
And the lightness, I'd like to rise

I dreamed of the windy and wildness of freedom
Of silence so silver and a soul not beaten
Full of spirit, laughter, and delight
And disappearing fear of the night

When people are stone, poor and alone
What am I but faceless and wasted on this world
I think of the sun and the moon and the stars
And I rise


03/23/99:10:33:35
Jimbo

Your Title  Fear Of Doubts

Last night I burned your picture,
Ran my toes into the wall,
I pondered the thunder storms of love
And the tears of pain that fall, I'd like to weather every storm and find a rainbow after all.

I dreamed of walking thru a desert,
thirsting true love and a shot
Full of passion quenching romance,
And a heart thats burning hot.

When people I hear, talking of doubt,
What am I seeing, myself in a mirror?
I think trust and respect is what we all need,
And what gets in the way is our fear.


03/23/99:03:21:32
JR Greely

Your Title  Midnight Surrender

Last night I walked alone in the meadow,
Ran my toes thru the soft prairie grass,
I pondered the moonlight
And the and the stars up above I'd like to give up this lonesome for love.

I dreamed of a soul mate,
a friend through the years and a night without lonely, heartache or tears.
Full of laughter and love, one who is always tender,
And live in a world of Midnight Surrender.

When people stop dreaming, or stop time in its track,
What am I feeling, with all the love that I lack.
I think I believe that the future will send her,
And fulfill all my dreams of a Midnight Surrender.


03/26/99:22:04:41
Adam Nail

Your Title  Forlorn

Last night I say the glow of your face in the dusk
Ran my toes through the sheets of candy coated deceit
I pondered the reason why I gave myself to your betraying love
And the callous heart I'd like to rip apart

I dreamed of road leading to a new start
Only leads me in circles and a narrower path
Full of hate
And pain, but always showing sympathy

When people fall to their knees
What am I suppose to do with broken wings
I think your the god looking down upon me
And you get pleasure out of what you see


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