Whistling Pig Music/Redbird Cafe's "Write A Song..."

contest # 1 - submissions (Jan 8 - Feb 1, 1999)


01/08/99:22:33:44
by Belle B.

Your Title Christmas Overdose

I found you in the kitchen eating
Indelibly marked with coconut and syrup
And there with crumbs of disgust on your face when
I ran across and took, that last pecan bar

This house seems so empty since the sweets are gone
My bags are bulging silently but crying out in shame
You know that I am leaving to find a sweeter song,
The bell in my heart tolls out your name...

Are there any more cookies out there
Are there any more cookies out there...


01/09/99:17:04:13
Dick Walker

Your Title Quarks in my Tacos

I found your name in big shiny letters
Indelibly scrawled on my brain
And there with trucks on the highway
I ran across her in the rain

This house seems as cold as Alaska
My bags are circling over St. Paul
You know that, yes you know that I'll ask her
The bell indisputably calls

Are there quarks, lots of quarks in my tacos
Are there plenty of quarks for us all?


01/10/99:09:13:35
ml

Your Title Mercy

I found you in the treetops
Indelibly etched in the wind of my mind
And there with hallmark of heaven
I ran across the sublime

This house seems like someone else's
My bags are open and yours to fill
You know that I don't belong here
The bell in the tower is tired

Are there any more words to say
Are there any more truths to deny


01/11/99:14:09:43
Leon Peek

Your Title Pick-pocket From Bozeman

I found you your hand in my pocket,
Indelibly branded as after my cash.
And there with nickles, dimes, and quarters
I ran across a few pennies made out of brass.

This house seems safe without you.
My bags are not ransacked no more.
You know that whatever you donne
The bell in hell rings as of yore.

Are there just a few sweet whores,
Are there fewer bar room doors.


01/17/99:19:11:43
darlene yanez

Your Title  Lost

I found you in dance
Indelibly present and wild
And there with only chance
I ran across a crying child

This house seems quiet now
My bags are torn and spent
You know that I failed somehow
The bell in your heart is silent

Are there any others so near?
Are there any others so dear?


01/20/99:17:25:39
Olivia de Lys

Your Title  Falling From Grace

I found you laughing at the rain
Indelibly distant from this place
And there with thunder, the lightning, and pain
I ran across a fallen grace

This house seems old and stale
My bags are are too weighed down to leave this jail
You know that this love is sick, but it just won't pale
The bell in town seems to toll the tale

Are there any reasons left to breathe?
Are there any words left to bereave?


01/20/99:21:44:20
Teresa Mohon

Your Title  Front Row Seats

I found you driving that fast car south
Indelibly you made your mark
And there with passenger side... unoccupied
I ran across a front row seat, with only the dashboard piercing the dark

This house seems much like another hotel
My bags are never unpacked
You know that I'll not stay...I am not that way
The bell in my head tells me it's time to go, another show, another relationship slacked

Are there front row seats for us slackers, for us who let the best things slide
Are there frontrowseats for us slackers, who are always looking for that easy ride


01/21/99:22:12:26
Robert Rodriguez

Your Title  Pointless

I found you, dear, in that neon-lit bar
Indelibly propped up against the far wall
And there with drunkards, embracing your sin
I ran across secrets who knew me by name

This house seems to suit you, it slurs its goodbyes
My bags are, for now, the only burden I'll bare
You know that it's pointless, though sharp as a blade
The bell in your heart, dear, I've forgotten it's there

Are there bells in this heaven I'm running off to?
Are there hells worth my time, dear -- please tell me it's true.


01/22/99:21:14:17
N.E.Walls

Your Title  Verlon's Lament

I found you so distant, so hurtful, so crass.
Indelibly sentenced to life in the pen.
And there with husbands, this side of the glass,
I ran across "Delta" tattooed on your...skin.

This house seems a prison, a void without you.
My bags are not packed yet, not headed for court.
You know that she'll hurt you, then what will you do?
The bell in this heart, love, will not sell you short.

Are there other fine husbands who've lost a good wife?
Are there other sweet Deltas serving forty to life.


01/23/99:23:42:47
Ron Baber

Your Title  The Way It Must Be

I found you with a look so forlorn
Indelibly stamped deep in your eyes
And there with hope we could be reborn
I ran across a field of lies

This house seems frigid and empty
My bags are packed and there by the door
You know that this is the way it must be
The bell in my heart tolls evermore

Are there reasons to continue?
Are there options to explore?


01/27/99:11:56:02
Ted Hoffman

Your Title  The Quantized Duplicity of Optimal Performance

I found your feet sticking out from under the pickup
Indelibly stamped like tire tracks across some poor possum's face
And there with good fortune to find the keys in time
I ran across your legs backing out from the parking place

This house seems so much quieter since we both quit drinkin'
My bags are by the doorway and under my eyes
You know that this love of ours is like a ship sinkin'
The bell in ends the round and begins our goodbyes

Are there more just like you, will I find another?
Are there more just like me? Yep, I've got a twin brother...


01/28/99:14:47:34
Jerry Biggie

Seasons Of The Year

I found you
r child-eyes asking me for love
Indelibly writing on my life
And there with the rest of my soul...at last...
I ran across a place where I was needed.

This house seems warmer now; mine somehow.
My bags are finally put away and long forgotten.
You know that I was never used to setting down this long
The bell inside my heart is hailing my arrival, singing my revival

Are there seasons of the year now.
Are there seasons of the year.



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